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I got this lovely base from XEmoXRazorbladex: [link]

I got these flowers and leaves from MobMotherScitah: [link]
Background from google Images

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If you want to do an art trade or if you have a request, please comment me or note! :D Thanks! :heart:

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:iconmirror-glazed-eyes:
This looks amazing, I love the outfit :D

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Bloody-Scarlett made this wonderful icon, thanks again! ^^
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:icondjd1255:
She looks pretty good =)

However, putting fiction into reality, or rather, anime/cartoonish beings into real life isn't all that great. The background needs to be designed with the same style as with the character to draw out the true beauty in the character. If you can't do the background with the same style then use a picture as a base and style it to fit the character.

You did a great job in placing her to fit the picture, however, there are a few hints that show she is in front of the picture instead of in line with it. That is why it's best to use scenery that suits the character so it looks like the two are one and not one thing on top of another.

For example on the positioning, look at her feet, then hair, then the leaves/brush. By the positioning of the feet it shows that she is in fact behind some of the bushes and leaves. To fix this you simply have to use some sort of photo editing program, i.e Photoshop and feather/delete a portion of her hair to show that she is in the picture. This will help fit her in the picture and it would ease my sense of feeling that the characters out of place.

AS for the character, her hair is done real well. I like it. As for the eyes, I think there needs to be some sort of glow in the eye to show that light is reflecting off. At the moment her eyes appear dull. Maybe add some more gloss? And add some highlights and shadows to the body to give them depth. If the positioning is fixed along with the eyes, I believe it will turn into a masterpiece.

Anywho, I'm just giving advice for future use if you ever with to use this advice at all. I'm just trying to help =) Keep up the good work :thumbsup:


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:iconmellowmercy:
Wow! First of all let me say thank you for taking the time to write so much! Also, thank you for the advice. I am a beginner and after reading that I think it will help a lot in the future. :D I would also like to thank you for watching me! Well, in the end just thank you so much for everything.

Oh, and I am trying to get a photo editing program. Unfortunetly, the only ones I can find are very expensive. If you know of any really good ones, note me? :heart:

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Greetings fellow DeviantArties! I wanted to wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!

Christmas waves a magic wand over this world, and behold, everything is softer and more beautiful. ~Norman Vincent Peale

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:iconcinzia-chan:
she's really cute :)

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:iconmellowmercy:
Hehehe! Thank you! :D She took.. forever! :heart:

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Greetings fellow DeviantArties! I wanted to wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!

Christmas waves a magic wand over this world, and behold, everything is softer and more beautiful. ~Norman Vincent Peale

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:iconcinzia-chan:
I can imagine it :)

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:iconaleximusprime:
Very pretty! What a lovely background!

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:iconmellowmercy:
Aw! Thank you so much! :D

Oh, and I love the avatar!
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Greetings fellow DeviantArties! I wanted to wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!

Christmas waves a magic wand over this world, and behold, everything is softer and more beautiful. ~Norman Vincent Peale

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:iconaleximusprime:
No problem!

Thanks! :icondragonshy2:

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Yeah, I like TFA, you gotta problem wit dat?!? *shoots Dirt Boss's dart at your forehead*

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